new song

This is a new song. I think it's about death.

"Well I'm just hanging on by a vine
don't know what is wrong don't know what is right.
So take me down to the ocean side.

Tell me just where i stand
and what was there before the beginning X2

Can feel my bones inside
intense nostalgia makes you feel tongue tied.
The kiss of death makes you treasure life.

Tell me just where i stand
and what was there before the beginning X2

Can't look at yourself in the mirror,
the same way.
All Because a part of your soul has died.
Has died.

You left it long ago,
on that broken sand.
Next to your tears and a bright blue sky.
A bright blue sky.

Tell me just where i stand
and what was there before the beginning X2

This could be one of the best songs I have written, and i have never written about death. Exploring new subject matter is an important thing as a songwriter.
You can continue to write love songs, but it is good to seek out new influence other then lust and desire.
Take care everyone,
-jordy